All Comments on 'Breakfast'

Like the idea. Love that the dude has long hair, that was somewhat unexpected. Not so sure about dragging panties (sounds like a full diaper to me) . Gadzooks makes him sound like that weird space alien Gazoo that appeared in the Flintstones in the later years. Now I gotta find an episode to watch.

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it has a nice storytelling rhythm to it, timely in the run up to halloween. The gadzooks made me laugh

great old word. I enjoyed this one. surprise ending. fun.

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