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by Zandrite

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

Took a second read to see the double-meaning of in-/exhale, the intimacy of the close contact obvious at the first but deepening with each read, putting more details into the mental image.

Took a moment to realise the structure, taking a step backwards helped (zooming out too).

Thanks for taking the time to translate that moment into words.

shadow_stormshadow_stormover 3 years ago

Always a pleasure reading your work, Zan. This was amazing!

TheNovalistTheNovalistover 3 years ago

another great poem Zan... always a pleasure to read your work

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Hi, this is Zan. I write stories, poems... and occasionally things you might call a hybrid of the two. I love to hear opinions, so feel free to comment or contact if you have thoughts about what you’ve read. I’m dreamy, idealistic, a little kinky... and prone to such brillia...