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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Suggest:

"what before lay in darkness"

lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years agoAuthor
Ah, yes...

I seem to always get that wrong. Thanks, Anon.

theognistheognisabout 11 years ago
You're welcome

Although there's nothing incorrect about it, I was also wondering if 'sleight' was the word you really meant to use in the second stanza. Perhaps you meant to imply deception, but I'm thinking perhaps not.

lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years agoAuthor

I did mean "sleight" to imply deception.

theognistheognisabout 11 years ago

A new world made clear through deception? A welcome surprise? Interesting.

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