Broken

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A vague explanation for a break up.
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Look at me,
and tell me what you see.
Am I at all,
who you think I should be?

I listen to you,
like you told me to do.
I am standing in silence,
suffering too.


Speak to me.
Try to understand my plea.
Mold me,
into what I should be.

What am I?
Tell me why.
I'm crying for you,
while wishing to die.

It's not at all fair.
Don't you care?
I'm not enough,
So you left me bare.

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Paul4playPaul4playabout 3 years ago

Many deep heartfelt emotions, expressed in so few words....

Beautiful and lyrical.

Thank you laying yourself bare....

stickygirlstickygirlabout 3 years ago
Vulnerability

I love the vulnerability shown in your poems - you're not afraid to show your human weakness. In doing so you become stronger

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowabout 3 years ago

Made me feel the pain of world asking to fit people into given square shaped drawers while we all have bumps and curves that define us. Why can't we adopt the furniture instead so it fits us, not vice versa?

Thanks for sharing

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