All Comments on 'Cat and Mouse'

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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100! w/o further comment, 'cept I liked

DeepGreenEyesDeepGreenEyesabout 13 years ago
I can feel the chaos

and it's delicious.

Well done. 5.

theognistheognisabout 13 years ago
*****

Very nice.

Five.

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
Yeah

pretty coolio. Got me wondering where you were going on the spit up line. Then a good surprise at the end. It is a cute-sickle with some spit up.

buttersbuttersabout 13 years ago
glad this got a recommend

i might have missed it.

this turned from dark to light - i wasn't expecting it to go where it did, and i like being surprised. :) just goes to show how we all bring to the table and how that colours our expectations.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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think it should be 'spat up' but a nice twist

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ME TIME AND US TIME

with our children TK U MLJ LV NV

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