Cat's Paw

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Dance a shimmer over glassine
shallows and shake the drops
away. Whisper your shivering
quiver and chuckle
where the brook comes to play
in the pebbles at the shore.
Invite day dreams into sunny
glades on a summer morn, hushed
as a kitten stalking her jittery
dandelion prey. Cat's paw, kiss
my cheeks as soft as a fey
wind blows a different way.

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11 Comments
tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
KEEPING IN STRIDE

with things narrow and wide, TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The perfect mood piece to break the mood of a frigidly cold Winter day.

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
well, heck

I really DO love you work, Champagne. I enjoy your assonance and your alliteration, I truly enjoy your wit, which sometimes seems so hidden, yet really never is...hidden, that is.

xoxox

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TzaraTzaraover 17 years ago
Touched my soul.

Your writing is so beautiful! More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
beautiful

lovely diction, nice imagery. thanks...

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
Kitty

I have a black cat named shadow ...everything is prey!

this was a very good poem and I can relate.

Witty word wizard poem~

sandspikesandspikeabout 19 years ago
I guess a fey wind

does blow a diferent way. Smooth little work I enjoyed

reading.

duckiesmutduckiesmutabout 19 years ago
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Your poem has been mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
An idyllic flow

Love the way this one trickles like a sparkling brook-- a gorgeous poem, champ!

Flyguy

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