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There is a reason I wrote it the way it is, and its rather simple. I wrote that for an English project for school in 8th grade last year. Its rudimentary because I'm still grasping my style and technique, so cut me some slack. I've had four poems published and I'm 15 years old. I don't think I'm too bad for that to be happening.