All Comments on 'Chronicles of Joy - I love you'

by TheNovalist

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 4 years ago

a true Declaration of Love.

Thanks for this romantic poem about two people that focus on the lovely parts and look beyond the little flaws we all carry around.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Nova, you are far more talented than you give yourself credit for. I love how I can have an idea that I cannot form into words; yet, when I mention them to you: LIGHTBULB. You are amazing. And Shadow, your artwork is simple, yet stunning—tastefully done, subtle, romantic. I count it a privilege to have both of you as my friends.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Very beautifully written, Nova.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

You 'ole romantic <3

shadow_stormshadow_stormalmost 4 years ago

Always a pleasure reading your work, Nova. This was amazing!!!

EyeOfTheBeholderEyeOfTheBeholderalmost 4 years ago

Overall it was nice.

The first two stanzas set up for something deeper. Lead off with a literary bang. I like it.

The rhyme scheme and flow were traditional but good.

A little long winded in my opinion. Especially in poetry less is more.

Very touching and poignant.

The simple picture added a lot.

tazz317tazz317over 3 years ago
CHRONICLES TO ODES BRING JOY TO A BEHOLDER

if the beholden has the warmth to be less colder. TK U MLJ LV NV

RratedRRratedRover 3 years ago

I think you might just be my new favourite online poet. I find this one to be perfect in every way. It conveys a lot of feeling.

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Update - 2nd May Thank you all for your wonderful support for my little writing hobby. My schedule has cleared up quite nicely for the foreseeable future, so I should be able to pump a few out a good few chapters before the summer when I will be taking a little break for my v...

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