by TheNovalist
a true Declaration of Love.
Thanks for this romantic poem about two people that focus on the lovely parts and look beyond the little flaws we all carry around.
Nova, you are far more talented than you give yourself credit for. I love how I can have an idea that I cannot form into words; yet, when I mention them to you: LIGHTBULB. You are amazing. And Shadow, your artwork is simple, yet stunning—tastefully done, subtle, romantic. I count it a privilege to have both of you as my friends.
Overall it was nice.
The first two stanzas set up for something deeper. Lead off with a literary bang. I like it.
The rhyme scheme and flow were traditional but good.
A little long winded in my opinion. Especially in poetry less is more.
Very touching and poignant.
The simple picture added a lot.
if the beholden has the warmth to be less colder. TK U MLJ LV NV
I think you might just be my new favourite online poet. I find this one to be perfect in every way. It conveys a lot of feeling.