All Comments on 'Chronicles of loss - acceptance'

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

So very sad, those other shades of grey that fade out life's color...

shadow_stormshadow_stormover 3 years ago

Putting emotions into words is a hard thing to do - you do it amazingly well, Nova.

Never lose "hope" though, thats what keeps us going. :)

RiverMayaRiverMayaover 3 years ago
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Poignant and heart-breaking.

SpytrxSpytrxover 3 years ago

story of my life...

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

A waterfall of emotions falling and crashing down, but into a calm lake reflecting the thin facade and white lies of a blue sky above. Very melancholic.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Very well written. Like 29wordsforsnow said: “A waterfall of emotions.”

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