by ~Elizabeth~
read smooth and great visuals, of course you were at
my favorite location and that makes a 4 a 5. sandspike
I could feel the "emotion washing through [you] like the roar of the waves" in your words. That is what poetry is all about, as I understand it, to use words artisticly and figuratively to emote. You did all three wonderfully, and for this reader, brought those same emotions that I have to the surface. You 'emoted' me, Elizabeth! It reminded me of my favorite Leonard Cohen song, "Dance me to the end of love."