All Comments on 'Come Dance With Me'

by ~Elizabeth~

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice

read smooth and great visuals, of course you were at

my favorite location and that makes a 4 a 5. sandspike

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
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Dancing to the music of the soul

with the rhythm of the heart

sweet sound.

PicassosPleasurePicassosPleasure3 months ago

I could feel the "emotion washing through [you] like the roar of the waves" in your words. That is what poetry is all about, as I understand it, to use words artisticly and figuratively to emote. You did all three wonderfully, and for this reader, brought those same emotions that I have to the surface. You 'emoted' me, Elizabeth! It reminded me of my favorite Leonard Cohen song, "Dance me to the end of love."

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I am a lady as well as a slut when required and thrive in both situations. I am soul searching constantly. I am strong, independent, loving, loyal, imaginative, mischievous, sexual as well as sensual, passionate and compassionate person. I'm a free thinker, intelligent, spirit...