All Comments on 'Comes the Dawn'

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
DAWNING UPON MY PSYCHE

and go to where the most comfort is available. TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
very interesting 5 btw

use of rhyme scheme

bad analogy, like someone dribbling a basketball and slam dunk,

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Is your home

Somewhere in Asia specifically Southeastern Asia ?!

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago

Third World visions...

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