All Comments on 'Counting Teardrops'

such sad verses. might be even more powerful if a little tighter

Write to release the pain. Share it with those who care.

Heartbreakingly beautiful.

Very pretty & moving. Makes me shiver. (That's a good thing.)

You have 3 strong and excellent submissions. Please, do not stop writing. I hope you never count on praise or follows to be your motivation - it will find its way to you if you continue writing pieces with this style of passion.