All Comments on 'Dance Lesson'

Wonderful contrast of lesson learning.. this is a song, I can hear it song with a haunting beautiful female voice. I loved the imagines here and this part is wonderful...

Quote:

You were teaching me to trust

on that roughly polished floor

in that casino bar.

"Just look in my eyes and follow me."

I tried, I did,

and there was all this spinning and dipping...

and your eyes subtly guiding...

Life lessons on a smooth worn floor..

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Du~

Mentioned in the Sunday reviews

Clearly shows that everything in life requires a certain amount of trust and guidance through every step.

is a good lesson when it's fun doing it and a good teacher is everything, setting the example for the next.

Thank you

really liked this one. well done.

This is very nice, LJ; I love the structure and sentiment of the poem. Well done!

Flyguy

Surrendering to the lead takes practice -- and it's fun (as long as it ends when you leave the dance floor). :o) ~Imp

LJ, this poem actually made me feel the dance. I felt like I was spinning along with music. Wonderful cadence. A treasure. Thanks.

...the lesson of learning to trust another is there, but there's such joy in the lesson. I love this line: "I laughed into your eyes the whole time." You made me smile wide this morning - thank you.

...and always has been wildly erotic for me.