Swipe to see who's online now!
- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Darkness
- Comments
All Comments on 'Darkness'
by vixen_2006
Sort by:
- 2 Comments
LeBrozover 17 years ago~~
Just a suggestion
It would read even better without ellipses
And perhaps, split that last line into two separate lines.
Just a thought.
duddle146over 17 years agoDelicate!
Elegant and beautiful in a simple direct way. A wonderful
poetic bouquet!! Enjoyable!
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Swipe to see more cams!
