All Comments on 'Darkness: why are we afraid?'

the circle will continue till it ceases. TK U MLJ LV NV

Liked the internal rhyme first line of the last stanza

Think it might have been better AABB

The message come through loud and clear

@harry, yes i did miss that in the last stanza.. somehow inspiration for anything near poetic only comes during terrible times so exhaustion and mood were factors, lol couldnt make abab work so i went abcb. I also liked the rhythm on that last verse first line.. i wished i could get it throughout.. practice makes perfect I guess :P

@Tazz, you read alot of this eh? you commented on another one I did, http://www.literotica.com/p/boorreeddd

Thanks again both of you for comments