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by NovemberBaby

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maineman4umaineman4uabout 14 years ago
Beautiful Similes

This is an outstanding piece of literature. It is extremely well-planned and structured. Yet, as smooth as a pane of glass.

Got to run. And... read your two other poems. Keep expressing yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Devastating

But lovely and so real I can almost touch you.

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