All Comments on 'Desire's Fear'

by Maydaypilot

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RiverMayaRiverMayaalmost 2 years ago

I need a bigger fan.

elizalooelizalooalmost 2 years ago

Nailed it.

Every

single

word

Where do I sign up?

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 2 years ago

This is art!

Beautiful, sexy, erotic, seductive art!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sexy as ever Mayday, another 5 star entry!

swiftlytiltingswiftlytiltingalmost 2 years ago

So very beautifully arousing. "...using fingers slick with your own unwilling invitation" -- so deliciously expressed! "Calmly like he owns them" -- oh, how wonderful to be touched like that. To have "tethered lust" released... to know it's power and beauty and experience such freedom! Mmm. It's wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow.

Just…

Wow.

TheDokTheDokalmost 2 years ago

Erotic and so well written

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Older male. Natural beauty addict. I love. I feel the hard and soft, in most things. I know real and grace, and embrace them. I need to write, and strive to write well, to reach my reader. Flawed, flying blind, but still flying. I value feedback from ratings, public a...