by Honey123
Honey, your poems are very good...they touch you inside like any good book or poem. I was very impressed with your writing...Haven't read any of your stories, but if they are as good...wow.
Sincerely
ncman_01@yahoo.com
I wish someone felt for me like that. Again, I really liked this one.
Loved 'held captive by your eyes' & 'a second may be too long'...everything in between was great, but the opening grabbed my attention and the end slapped me upside my head demanding I not forget what I just read. With men it is sometimes neccesary to take extreme measures.
TY, BD
Been there. You captured so much, so eloquently. Well done! ~Imp
Very nice, honey.
Very erotic, and very romantic.
Your eyes, tho,
would be the ones, I think,
who take captives.
Capture me sometime!
When only steps
separate us,
and a second
may be too long.
I know that feeling. Yep, I definately know that feeling and Honey captured it perfectly with only a few words.
I love it. It just feels so right. Especially the part about eyes. Why do I have to lose all sense of time or decorum in those damn eyes?
(1) your a poet...I didn't know it.
(2) Devour me was tantalizing and scrumptious...
(3) I liked your poem, endearing and poetic.