All Comments on 'Di Or Die - Is The Game Still On?'

Quirky and original--with some interesting (and relevant) word play. I like it.

I also like the complex attitude the poem's speaker takes in response to a complex and plausible adult situation. That's a refreshing change from the cartoonish moral simplicity found in many Literotica stories (not erectus123's).

And the poem managed not even to hint at the late princess! Though I suppose it COULD have compared the wife's vagina to a highway tunnel that should be navigated cautiously.... But that's okay: the poem is plenty good as written. 5 stars.

Thanks for your comments, Sir. The saga of a returning wife after plodding a well-worn vaginal path is much like the hero's return ( Odysseus) to his household occupied by his wife's many suitors. What to do? Oh well, find the old wedding ring and go from there. Forgiveness is a gracious art often poorly practiced and highly erotic makeup sex can heal many of ego's wounds.