All Comments on 'doorways'

..........I didn't manage to read your whole poem. To make it more accessible perhaps you could form it into smaller portions, that is, if you want it read in its entirity. 50 for effort and welcome to Lit.

Tess

Glad you decided to post! Here you will get good and bad feedback as well as good and bad criti- well, that word i have difficulty spelling lol - one thing I am always getting harped on about here...

give it some time and see what people say...I do agree however that it would be best if you posted a new "Chapter" for each submission...makes it a little easier for the readers to follow...

Welcome and keep posting and take a look around at others on the site - it is a great place to let off some steam! :-)