All Comments on 'Embarrassingly, Blushingly'

Well done! The language used and the rhymes made this feel very girlish which I would say is a very desired effect. Good poetry!

well since you prefaced it..actually it is quite good.

100

.....a triolet. You have nothing to blush or be embarassed about.

Tess

I need a pedi/mani after reading this one--very girly-girl. Espie likes.

I'd like it better without the line explaining it's a triolet, but it's a five.