All Comments on 'Empty Bed'

oh this really works the heart muscle! the repetition and rhyme works well here, as it is used subtly and does not overtake the piece.

An easily related to subject

Described so well,

Finding the other person gone

And a great emptiness shares your bed...

I'm excited that people like the poem. It was my virgin submission to the site, and it's encouraging to get positive feedback so quickly.

my bi-sexual lover... so much that it pains me deeply.

is that it doesn't lead you around looking for an explanation to hang a comment on it goes right to the point

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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