All Comments on 'endlessly spacious'

the last stanza. Lovely.

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Review"

for Saturday Dec 11 2004

thanks for the read~

What an exquisite read. ~Imp

"between the dark and pillowed sheet of pink day"....AWESOME!!!

"Where stars scream silent

beyond the social order,"

For these two lines alone your poem is amazing. The excellent wording and imagery breathe life into your poem, helping it come alive in the reader's mind.