All Comments on 'endlessly spacious'

by steve porter

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Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Mirageover 19 years ago
Exquisite!

"Where stars scream silent

beyond the social order,"

For these two lines alone your poem is amazing. The excellent wording and imagery breathe life into your poem, helping it come alive in the reader's mind.

sacksackover 19 years ago
exquisite description..

"between the dark and pillowed sheet of pink day"....AWESOME!!!

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
A painted desert!

What an exquisite read. ~Imp

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
new poems review

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Review"

for Saturday Dec 11 2004

thanks for the read~

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
love

the last stanza. Lovely.

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