All Comments on 'Erosion'

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..and unforgiving read. If ever there was a poem advocating euthanasia!

'As winter draws near

her once solid frame whittles to a skeletal hue'

Is hue the right word here?

I'm nit picking. Good poem.

b'brig

in this can remove the glasses painted in rainbow swirls of denial ..lovely job on the subject of aging...its like taking medicine...o)) bluerain