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Anonymous6 months agoEyes may be the pathway for love, but lips can sometimes challenge, if spoken words of love pass through the lips of a poet. Well done!
Jorunn6 months agoAuthorThank you, @BlissMara. It's pretty quiet in Non-Erotic, and comments like yours help me to continue writing.
Jorunn6 months agoAuthorThank you @Anon, @Satyr61, and @sexybreadtalk. The inspiration for this poem came from a story I hope to submit soon, called "Christmas in Norway Tour". I am incorporating this poem into the story. A Christmas tradition in Norway is to hang a lighted star in the window to guide the Three Wise Men. The main male character falls in love and the end of the poem is his realization that her eyes are like the lighted star that guided him to her love.
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Jorunn@JorunnA poet at heart, and writer of stories; of love, romance and nature's glories. There is some of me in all of my stories. I am a Huldra, a Shield-Maiden, and a Valkyrie. Jorunn Skaldmaer is an historical figure, one of the only known female Skaldic poets, and worked in the ...
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