All Comments on 'Feelings of Love'

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TsothaTsothaover 10 years ago

I liked the final line, "Fill your heart with as much as you can bear." I was thinking that "expressing love" is sometimes difficult, if others hurt you back; the final line then gains a different meaning, that you must endure as much as you can. Which isn't what you had intended, I think, but still. Nice message.

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