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by blackvelvetgirl

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
This is hot

and so literate. I really enjoyed reading it. The last two lines are great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
There is

Something I like about this poem. I think it needs a bit more polish with structure, but this poem is still good erotica.

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