All Comments on 'Fool's Gold'

Bittersweet Poetry!

Beautifully heartbreaking.

And hopefully ending happily.

Thanks for another aww-moment.

Not the first! Not the last?

That has the flavor of a Tennyson poem. Don't ask me why; I couldn't tell you. It just does.

The message is one that most of us can relate to... finding something beautiful, then feeling disappointed and sad when it is gone, but still remaining hopeful in finding it anew. Well done, Maya.

So beautiful. Thank you for posting

I love this so. So very bittersweet. X

So very beautiful

Thank you all so very much. I am truly humbled.

I love this river maya ....it's moving ....I tremble with an aching heart at the same time with hope and bliss....

Keep up the literary gold! Love ya! Lol....

A lyrical, whimsical reflection, filled with dismay and hope. Amother wonderful contribution from this fine. writer.. An easy five stars.

Every verse of this majestic composition made me feel hope and despair at the same time... that magical last verse, though, sated my soul, it left me craving for more and more all the same...