Fool's Gold

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I once had a tiny star,
it came down from the sky,
I thought we'd always be true friends,
the little star and I.
But when the evening died
and the night sky turned to blue,
the little star kissed my brow
and to the heavens flew.

I once had a red, red rose,
it bloomed beside my door,
and each day that I asked of love,
she answered: Evermore.
She wakened me with fragrance,
she greeted me each morn,
but then one day, her blush turned gray
and all she left were thorns.

I once had a true love
more magnificent then precious stones
it lit the night with passion's fire,
and its brilliance far outshone
the starlight in the heavens
and the sun at break of day,
and all the time I kept this love,
my fears were held at bay.

(But the heady brew that slaked my thirst
soon turned to bitter wine,
my heart and soul were cast aside;
True love was never mine.)

But still I dream that someday,
I will feel the starlight's kiss
and wake again to a perfumed rose,
and laugh with mindless bliss
at the wonder and the magic
of love and passion bold,
and never care that what I seek
might just be foolish gold.

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AzureAshAzureAshabout 3 years ago

Every verse of this majestic composition made me feel hope and despair at the same time... that magical last verse, though, sated my soul, it left me craving for more and more all the same...

Ma8grets3weaknessesMa8grets3weaknessesabout 3 years ago

A lyrical, whimsical reflection, filled with dismay and hope. Amother wonderful contribution from this fine. writer.. An easy five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Moved

I love this river maya ....it's moving ....I tremble with an aching heart at the same time with hope and bliss....

Keep up the literary gold! Love ya! Lol....

RiverMayaRiverMayaover 3 years agoAuthor
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Thank you all so very much. I am truly humbled.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

So very beautiful

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I love this so. So very bittersweet. X

MsCherylTerraMsCherylTerraover 3 years ago

So beautiful. Thank you for posting

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
Another beautifully written poem

The message is one that most of us can relate to... finding something beautiful, then feeling disappointed and sad when it is gone, but still remaining hopeful in finding it anew. Well done, Maya.

chastenchastenover 3 years ago

That has the flavor of a Tennyson poem. Don't ask me why; I couldn't tell you. It just does.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

Bittersweet Poetry!

Beautifully heartbreaking.

And hopefully ending happily.

Thanks for another aww-moment.

Not the first! Not the last?

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