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All Comments on 'Forbidden Desires'

by SirBigfoot

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
True

True to life for many.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 5 years ago
needs some work but a good start

rhyming couplets take time to write and can easily slip towards doggerel if you are not careful with scansion and content

shaknashaknaalmost 3 years ago

The imagery of the last stanza is perfect.

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