All Comments on 'Free Pillar of the Universe'

Ironic that such a dark poem could shed so much hope and light. Beautiful words, wonderful voice, you are such a pleasure to read. Thanks, D, for sharing these! Kiss. ~Minx

A lot of this is pure cliche, and in a couplet rhyming scheme it just falls flat. I think you could have pared the verbage down by quite a lot and told the same story in a much more effective manner.

The intent is there, but the execution isn't there.

great read, I have enjoyed

all your poems today and

look forward to reading more.

Thank you.

~ J

thanks for sharing~

and for the journey~