All Comments on 'fridge'

I can tell you wrote about a real experience and you did a great job with it. I like the poem and it makes sense to me, except the first line. I know the first line has meaning for you but as a reader I'm lost. It seems like a stray line that's just hanging out near the poem. But the poem is good enough that it first line isn't that big of a distraction.

This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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