All Comments on 'Frozen'

by Jayleen88

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bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
hi, this is my second comment

but on your third submission to the poetry section LOL. I think this is valid, no one's gonna want to read your actual poem if you keep putting this silly nonsense before the poem.

Jayleen88Jayleen88about 15 years agoAuthor
No nonsense

Yeah, don't worry, I won't put nonsense in the poem... Thanks!!

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago
It's not the nonsense...........

... in your poem but the small speech before each one you post. Dispense with that and follow bflagsst's advice and you'll certainly improve.

Tess

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