All Comments on 'Hang pink and languid'

What a fun piece --

when a man does that,

he's slovenly;

when a woman does,

it's erotic...

Thank you for this. You've managed to be both humourous and raise erotic images, no mean feat.

You've been absent too long. It's good to see your work once more.

Tess

about the laptop leaver? Don't leap to conclusions-- investigate poet-haste!

Fun poem, Darkmaas!

Fly

..an excellent poem! Wonderful imagery and subtle eroticism.

Well done!

oh oh love it love IT! I have nothing intelligent to say. the dialogue was very realistic. cheers!

I left my stockings in the back of the limo on the way to my wedding reception. does that count?

annaswirls