All Comments on 'Hent'

content is okay too. presentation?

really a pleasure to read an erotic poem that doesn't wack me over the head with overly graphic language, but instead relies on poetic devices (phrasings, imagery and metaphor) to carry the theme. I agree with Harry though that you could tinker and switch up some of the line breaks to make it even better. Just my opinion and an enjoyable read. 5ed.

some lines are wrought like a tapestry