by varioral
I used my hand, but it certainly made me long for the pleasures of cunninlingus - which I hadn't experienced for a while! anyone interested?
I thought it was gorgeous and well written but a little unfocused. I tell you one thing, you did something fairly original here, no mean feat.
it did turn me on enough to jill-off, there is nothing quite like being made love to by a kind and gentle man... it makes one feel so special
vrosej10 for your constructive comments.
I see you have a quite a body of work yourself that I will read more of.
tx for the anonymous comments too!
i've already read this 2-3 times, keep coming back. so warm and gentle.
The only line I don't care for is this one:
At the sliver of the river
Five.