All Comments on 'Hills and Longing'

The only line I don't care for is this one:

At the sliver of the river

Five.

Well done! Really brings across the eroticism of nature....

i've already read this 2-3 times, keep coming back. so warm and gentle.

vrosej10 for your constructive comments.

I see you have a quite a body of work yourself that I will read more of.

tx for the anonymous comments too!

it did turn me on enough to jill-off, there is nothing quite like being made love to by a kind and gentle man... it makes one feel so special

I thought it was gorgeous and well written but a little unfocused. I tell you one thing, you did something fairly original here, no mean feat.

I used my hand, but it certainly made me long for the pleasures of cunninlingus - which I hadn't experienced for a while! anyone interested?