by legerdemer
Every time I read this poem the experience is different. The reality of the poem is fluid for me while the structure is solidly polished.
This poem has such fluidity. It flows like a river. My favorite line is: 'a marine layer of "I wish..."' So pretty.
this is lovely. Carefully structured and gripping. Very effective. Five
Shiva-Lingam !!! 5-ed , Mer .