by darkitude
Oh my — a sub with attitude, responding with an attitude of, "Is that all you've got? Is that the best you can do?!" Fascinating new name given you BTW. Take time & Google "Brigid" and its roots in Celtic mythology.
Poem uses good "antipathy" ensconced within succinct words
----- Example: ... clip ... Puleeze ...
----- WHICH CAN BE BROKEN DOWN TO: "lip pull" "pull easy" "pull please"
----- strikes a tone and maintains it well