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DesejoDesejoalmost 13 years ago
Love the idea

I love the idea of this, but I think the first lines are (probably intentionally) overstated. Of course, I prefer Cherry Garcia so this may just be a question of taste :)

Fish_TalesFish_Talesalmost 13 years ago
Love it

As someone who has pulled the pin on the rat-race to enjoy life and family, I enjoyed the sentiments in this poem. Affluenza we call it here. Oh, I have never had a chunky monkey and I'm sure it's nice, but I would be leaning to a nice cold beer... Excellent work.

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