All Comments on 'I am'

I like the desire and longing evoked by the words. ~Minx

Well worded. Pulls all those feelings right to the surface. Nicely done, Sophia.

The lust combined with the loneliness is very strong. A moving bit of verse, SJ.

very often in that same situation. These are all too familiar emotions.

Those thoughts and feelings are perhaps universal at one time or another, and yet said so wonderfully well here.

Well Done.

Been here more than a few times. Will be here again tonight!

Nice collection of thoughts! You have reined them in well!

an urge here for fullfillment. it does leave one in limbo. nice work!!......don