by Hippokrene
Could have been best in a writing class. For me it was more of a draft for many ideas to put into the drawer and let simmer until you are ready to build some thing with each case....
It's 6 a.m. and I still can't believe I read the whole thing! Morbid fascination perhaps? Most long pieces I find here fail to hold my interest - too many words while saying very little. Yours, on the other hand, is like a montage ~ you've done this in an interesting style and managed to hold me through the end.
..............The Broz, I stayed to the end. This took a lot of effort to create and it is worth reading through. Different approach but is it poetry? I've come to look for Hippokrene's work now, it's never the same and usually fascinating.
Tess
Wild poem, or poem thingy. Interesting read. Seriously. It's different. :)