All Comments on 'I See God'

But I see the footprints that is not my own.

"is" should be "are".

i deducks 4 badly speiling grammer & sin tacks,

Read the "other" Bible, the one that the Roman emperors (and later Roman Catholic Church) did not influence....the Nag Hammadi Library, and then write your prose. Your attempt(s) to tell about God are all screwed up.

Okay Negative!!!

I'm not writting these poems for a grammar lesson,or a biblical lesson.I write for my piece of mind and to capture my thoughts.If they offend you ,please don't read them.

They are to inspire,console,cheer-up,but nothing more.a mistake does not make the poem.and i'm not in here to get them published.

And dude,if you don't love god then why read a poem about him?If you're an atheist,then stay away.

But thank you for the input ANYWAY!!!!!

Okay Negative!!!

I write about my personal experiences with GOD and what HE has done for me.I'm not writting these poems for a grammar lesson,or a biblical lesson.I write for my piece of mind and to capture my thoughts.If they offend you ,please don't read them.

They are to inspire,console,cheer-up,but nothing more.a mistake does not make the poem.and i'm not in here to get them published.

And dude,if you don't love god then why read a poem about him?If you're an atheist,then stay away.

But thank you for the input ANYWAY!!!!!

wrong with conveying your personal experiences with GOD and what HE has done for you in poetry form.

At least that makes one of us, the truth he treats me like shit every time he gets, and that is why I question him, so I say duck him. But how ever on the other side I feel as if the only one who truly cares about me is Jesus my Savour, I feels as thou he is forced to play the 'good Somerton' and make sure that I am not hurt and that I am alright. And to give me morale support.

this could be any of us looking for loopholes. TK U MLJ LV NV