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candlesfyrecandlesfyreover 12 years ago
The title says it all.

but try again with some formatting style and what is Ia under-rated? believe me when I say that My rough drafts are bad really really bad but not quit like this....

This has little to do with Coffee, and the title is some what of a warning in and of itself...

Everyone has to start somewhere! and I am by no means saying call it quits! I am just saying try again with one theme like Coffee.

Coffee is great,

Coffee is Sweet,

so am I...to eat!

Darkly brews.

Coffee dripping.

So do I...when panting!

Juices flow.

Stronger grows.

So will you...when I'm through.

get a rythm, a beat, and run with a theme.

try it you'll like it!

candlesfyrecandlesfyreover 12 years ago

prove I still need a great editor and there is alway room to improve!

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