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All Comments on 'I Wonder If You Think Of Me?'

by AnaLeePleasured

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tom6tom6over 17 years ago
From the heart

Brilliant and yes to all

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Mmmmmm... I loved this piece..

nicely done.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
longing

A wistful wondering about another's affections. Poignant and endearing.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Seems to be pretty good but those last nine lines need to go; their impact feels to be devastating on the rest of the poem. The poem could use some tweaking, but that's almmost minor and superficial next to those last nine lines.

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