All Comments on 'I'm Your Venus'

If that illustration represents the average, you've just busted the curve!

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder - sometimes it's not the looks but the heart that counts.

....combination - the picture and poem compliment one another making the whole better.

Tess - welcoming you to Literotica

willing partners... is still love.

You don't have to be Brad and Angelina to experience the same 'love'.

The ratings are in the hearts of the participants and no others.

I thought the poem was good, but I think you missed an opportunity with the visual. This torso IS quite sexy. It did not come across as an ironic contrast. With it you are saying: OK, Venus is very sexy (see example). But other women can be too (totally agree). Did we really need the demonstration of Venus?

IMO, had you put a photo of a dressed, plain looking woman it would have worked on our imagination much better: before reading the poem and after. Thanks for your poem.

or a very good close friend,, TK U MLJ LV NV

if only Perfect exists. CRUEL yes. A fem friend heard that a new aquaint suggested her breasts were small. Like his Prick, and head, her Immediate refrain.

A fine coming together Ode post.