All Comments on 'In My Father's Garden'

by BlissMara

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year ago

5 Stars! You craft such beautiful poems. What a lovely tribute to your father and his passion for the land.

TheDokTheDokabout 1 year ago

This is so incredibly beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is beautiful and just what I needed. I have missed this kind of work. Xx

elizalooelizalooabout 1 year ago

Another stunning submission - should your father's garden not live on past his life span, your poem/eulogy will forever remain a testament to his love of the land and in your memory. 5*s

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotabout 1 year ago

I love the generational symmetry of this poem. Your father’s garden is a living work of art. Your beautiful poem is art that gives it life in another medium that can be experienced anywhere… …and will be forever.

A shared gift to each other.

And to your readers.

Paul4playPaul4playabout 1 year ago

You have found the sweet spot….where your father, his garden, and you all coverage into One.

This is beautiful and loving.

We are honored to have you share this with us!

Satyr61Satyr61about 1 year ago

WOW!! This is AMAZING & BRILLIANT!! So beautiful!! I love the line " adding years to his life and life to his years." Sheer poetry at its best!

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Writing is my passion, my solace, my relaxation, and my joy. I enjoy reading others' writings, and watching their processes unfold and transform. We gain skill, breadth, and creative reach in our craft from one another; supporting, coaxing, and encouraging.