All Comments on 'In the Kitchen'

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
MOVING IS TRAUMATIC

where memories must remain. TK U MLJ LV NV

NeonuroticNeonuroticabout 12 years ago
Koba

This poem is wonderful. Personal history poems written well like this one puts the reader right there with you. Although, bittersweet and made me feel sad, I enjoyed it.

Maria2394Maria2394about 12 years ago
so very good

and it is mention on the new poems thread in the forum.

~ maria

Kat0511Kat0511about 12 years ago
I still carry

the key to the home I grew up in, long since sold, but etched forever in my heart and head. I don't think it will ever leave my keychain...nor will the memories...

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I live in Alaska. I am a Dominant. I enjoy writing erotic stories and poetry. Would love to read any and all feedback from anyone who reads my writings. Feel free to contact me!