All Comments on 'Injustice'

what you're saying. And it has been said many times before. If you don't mind a suggestion, I would like to make one. I think if you make this poem more personal (talk about injustices you personally know about) it would make a more powerful poem. In other words, describe some scene where you, or someone close to you, has been judged by their looks.

Keep writing!

I know what you mean about society's fixation and criticism towards appearances. It's unfortunate but true.

Some people just will never understand and can only perpetuate a distorted view of what's important. Nicely done. Thank you. LJ

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thanks for the journey

Sadly in this world, our looks DO matter to most people. If you're old/overweight/tall/have an accent you will be treated differently. I try not to discriminate, but its part of life, certainly the less serious bits of it, and will never go. Nice poem though.